Reviews for Shattered Tongue
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
The haiku has a fantasy-like beauty in it mixed with horror. Very unique.

Bri Neves chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Unique. I quite enjoyed that.
Basara chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
making one speechless on such events...

In State of Agony chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
a good haiku, keep it writing

This world is ((In State Of Agony))
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Yeah! Another haiku. Lovely job.

Happy 200!

a beautiful somewhere chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
There's a real ethereal beauty to this.

Like it's something vitally important, but you're not meant to entirely understand. Which is a pretty awesome thing to do when writing, if you ask me. ;)
EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
Great! as usual! Congrats on your 200th! As always, Keep writing!
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
I love it! Though I don't quite think the last line meshes with the rest ofthe piece.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Good job on making it to your 200th submission. Hope you submit 200 more.

EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
This is interesting and almost mysterious. It makes me think of a sham wedding for some reason..well done on making 200!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Lovely haiku. HAPPY 2OOth!