|Reviews for Untitled|
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
wow! fantastic descriptions, really puts the reader there. i enjoyed the last line also.
| someone's sideshow chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I know this is an older piece of yours, but I stopped by your profile and decided I should review it, since I read it.
I just want to say that you did a superb job of capturing the time period through your prose. It was lovely to read, very poetic, and I think that it is highly appropriate of the time period. Very nicely done.
| Sahara Hayden chapter 1 . 5/24/2007
Oh my! This was absolutely beautiful! It created so many wonderful and real emotions. I LOVED it. Excellent job.