Reviews for Twisted Bitter Lies
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
WOW! This is so different from anything you've written, and it was wonderful! Really. Besides the profanity (yeah, yeah, im a goody-two-shoes) it was so awesome! Very emotional and powerful and different! I love it when you create your own style, make a poem really yours. This was great, awesome job!
Bri Neves chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Whoa. I can feel the angst.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
That was scary. But very powerful of course. Great job.
NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Wow. Potent. Very well written.

Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Wow, this was truly a deep poem, one that really hits home. I almost wandered if you weren't describing my father for most of the poem, but that isn't here or there. I hope that if somebody has betrayed you then they regret their actions, yet that would only be wistful thinking wouldn't it? If this experience is still ongoing for you, I can't give you much advice other than to just be the proverbial rock. Solid as can be and allowing the harshness of the world to pass you by. The inward crying might not cease for a long time, but why should those that hurt you enjoy the satisfaction of their deeds? Sorry, I'm rambling. Good poem, as alawys. Keep it up.


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