|Reviews for recycling rhymes|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
I liked this... I kinda expected it rhyme though.. lol... the format is great and I like the message... something everyone on fp can relate to
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
You have so much talent… I am jealous. I’m not kidding.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
I definately like the concept behind this, and how you give the specifics to make the reader understand the totality of the point. I also like the creativeness of this. With the parentheticals and word seperations. Well done. MD:77.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Maybe rhyming is a defense mechancism, but I wouldn't be able to vouch for that because I've never been able to rhyme well. The form of this poem is so effective in getting the mood and the message across. Oh, and interesting name change there.
| hey maria chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Just because it's been said before, doesn't mean it doesn't sound good.
That sentence sounds weird. I know.
I feel like the last lines aren't the end. Other than that I adore this poem.