Extraordinarily intense feelings youre writing, but is simply the pain that brings love, right? :)

i really like it. the way the poem is formatted and the font really caught my attention all at once and drove to read the rest... good job!

very beautifully written. nice work!

The style is interesting. I wonder who you're talking to- someone else or yourself? Either way the words seem coated with venom and hate- maybe it's someone who has a good deal of self-loathing. And is masochistic. Picking at old wounds- 'old decay' in them regularly. Anyway, this is really good. I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more reviews. Your other stuff seems to be pretty popular. ;)

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I love pieces that make me think, while only using a few lines.

Great job on this, and well done for experimenting with setting it out.

Wow, I really love this. Very visual, I also really like the format; I love experimental/concret poetry.

-Anne x0x