|Reviews for wishings|
| hero chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
crazy good stuff :]
i like the part about 11:11
olivia, you're still one of the best writers i know
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
The word connection of, "godpleasegod", works so well in this to speed up the wish-thought to the speed that many think in when hoping for such things. I especially like the line break you've given in the last two lines. It halts the reader at just the right place of inflection. Well crafted. MD:77.