And the answer to the question of course is, No. This poem obviously appeals to the masses because it's very easy to relate to, and I like it, but it's bland. Just not much of a spark to really keep the reader reading.

hey there!

that was a pretty good poem..short, simple, yet it's full of emotion...

keep up the good work..

come by my page and check out my poems and story, too..if you're interested.

lots of love, colorfulcharcoal xD

Hey!

It's was pretty good, except for the one line-

You never call or talk to me, or me you,

the or me you part dosen't make since, but maybe I'm just reading it wrong.

If you don't mind I would really appreciate it if you read and review my story- I'm your biggest mistake. I also just added a new poem/song- What Happened?

Thanks!