Reviews for Fragile
Piffs chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
That was a sad poem, but somehow really good at the same time. You are truely amazing

iris oasis chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
great imagery. i love the lines: "staining our tongues/ the color of/ the wilting sun." nicely done.
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Correction: dying

Huh. Interesting, Shadow. I like it.

Basara chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
it's a cycle continuum...

abandonedwings chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Great poem!

But wouldn't 'dieing' be 'dying'?