Reviews for I Miss You
Angela Nichole chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
This is really good! Keep up the good work! :)
LiberryBooked chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
I like the way that you spaced the poem as a whole. The lines (that put up with all my condescension, my lying) becomes so much better my the spacing. But I don't think that the last line ends the poem appropriately. I thought I misread it, and that it was suppose to read I miss you, love, or I miss you, my love. I think that it needs a bit more closure, but other than that it is good.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
You captured it all here. Sounds so simple, yet how complicated. Nicely done. m

p.s. If you ever figure out the spacing issue, let me know I've just given up!