Reviews for If I don't
firemounrain chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
It makes me think about the sound of one hand clapping.

If there are two answers to one question- huh. I like that one.
Xalga chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
No verse but that's normal I think. I like the simple changes of numbers and words (two and 2). The last line is a good bow at the end of it. Keep writing.