Reviews for Wait
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Sambot: thx for your comments. Here's a take-off on your poem which I enjoyed very much. I often comment with some 'feeling' generated by someone else, hope it doesn't discomfit you. manuel

Three million heartbeats till I next see Thee,

One million breaths inhaled and exhaled brief,

But on the calendars there are no marks,

To tell Thee that the days have slowly gone,

There's just more green upon tall maple trees,

Under which one hundred miles more I'll run,

There's just a few more white hairs in my beard,

And a few million kisses less from Thee.
Long Island Iced Tea chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
I can practically hear this in my head like a song. The lyrics are good - if this could only be set to music it would be delicious. Yeah, as in tasty. Btw, could you please review Secrets of Storms by C. Shells? I'd really appreciate it. The link is:-

fictionpress s/ 2356039/ 1/

(Just remove the blanks between the dot and slashes)