Reviews for Emery & Me
MrsHellman chapter 18 . 8/26/2010
I just have to tell you! Major thing here! When they were caught kissing, the teacher addressed Emery as Mr Jones, but Cobe said that they were named Joseph in the chapter where Opal had a party.
Hmm chapter 18 . 8/26/2010
I really loved this. Though I hated Amber, ugh. I felt sorry for Cobe though. Can I have him? :3

Heh. I just wanted to say this is really great. Well written and everything. Thank you for this.
Rae Alex89 chapter 18 . 8/24/2010
I want you to know that I absolutely ADORED this story! I mean, I hated her sister the whole time, but I loved it. You truly conveyed the complex relationships between siblings and how it effects friendships. Thank YOU for writing!
AuraVybrid chapter 18 . 8/21/2010
Not one for sanity chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
OMG, I hadn't even noticed that I had read another one of your stories before: no wonder I Loved this one as wellD
Not one for sanity chapter 18 . 8/15/2010
Normally I hate love triangles D but this one was pretty amazing! Awesome story, I loved Bronny's personality and and Matt's random thoughtsD and the attraction between Emery and Bronny was WOW. I do feel a bit bad for Cobe, he seemed pretty damn amazing too. Loved this story so much!
gulistala chapter 17 . 8/7/2010
Amber's being unfair. She doesn't give, too! So many times Bronwyn wanted to be closer to her and Amber pushed her away!
gulistala chapter 13 . 8/7/2010
I want to hurt Amber so bad for not trusting her sister. She's valuing Emery more than her sister. That's not fair.
gulistala chapter 11 . 8/7/2010
Gosh when is Bronwyn going to realise that Amber is being unfair to her?
gulistala chapter 10 . 8/7/2010
What is Amber's problem? Someone needs to slap her hard to reverse the damage that must've happened when she was dropped on the head as a baby!
gulistala chapter 7 . 8/7/2010
Wait aren't Bronwyn and Andrea juniors and Amber a senior?
gulistala chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
Okay I'm not sure of whether to be irritated or worried with Amber's behaviour.
gulistala chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Is Amber gealous of her sister? And who is the older sister?
ModernScribe chapter 18 . 8/6/2010
This has to be the most original story I've ever read here on FictionPress. Sure, it was a romance story so there were more than a few clues on how it would end, but the way you got to that end was ingenious. No, more than that: it was brilliant! Most of all though, I loved how you caught the sister aspect of it all. As a person with four sisters and no brothers, I can safely say that nothing I've read short of Pride and Prejudice (nice movie tie in on that subject by the way) has come closer to describing what it's like to live in a house with sisters only. It was the perfect blend of sacrificial love and underlying jealousy. This story was a seemingly effortless portrayal of the darker side of the phrase, "what we'd do for the ones we love." Like I said, brilliant.
janiemanie1992 chapter 18 . 7/22/2010
o interesting and confusing and all that jazz. are these bands that they mention real? just wondering out of curiosity.

this was a good story and it was well written. i don't have much more to say.
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