Reviews for Emery & Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The drama drove me insane for a little bit but I really liked your story. Yes, I read it from start to finish in the less than half a day. (my computer must hate me right now). |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh oh oh! way way cute! took her long enough though, really |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh depressing i'm marking my spot so i can come back and finish it later very good so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow SOMEbody's PMSing. a lot so this is in reference to a couple chapters back but "Yay! Hitchhikers Guide! god movie!" and i read the intro thingy to the last chapter, i think, and you said "guh" just like your character. that was cool :-) |
![]() ![]() Emery's last name was Joseph throughout the story and changed to Jones here. And, 'him' and 'us' are not capitalized. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is realistic. DD i can totally understand how amber feels like, unfortunately. And i salute you for your awesome way of expressing the characters feelings and emotions. and the name cobalt is totaly roginal, cause i cant imagine someone with the name of cobalt, even emery though. DD love you for writing this, keep it up! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write SO well! You had me laughing out loud (Everyone now thinks im retarded, but the story was so worth it). I fell in love with Bronny, and Emery (duh). Cobe is such a sweetheart! and Amber is the bomb. I really can't blame anyone for anything that happened, so I fell in love with all the characters! Matt is soo funny. And the kids were oh-so-adorable. Sigh. The last part, when Amber lets Bron have Emery made me cry. You're awesome! Your story was awesome! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if shes cheating on emery or soemthingLL lool'ed when he was like 'look at what your wearing' aha |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was so cute! . .bit! |
![]() ![]() i have a feeling that 'jackie' is ... emery! |
![]() ![]() WTF her sister's scary lool i'm guessing that she somehow conned emery into thinking her interests are bronwyn's so like now she's freaked that if emery talks to bronwyn he'll cotton on. and so will bronwyn. awkward to the max much? :S (: |
![]() ![]() LOL i like this chick we should bond over shitty mornings. swera to god i'm late almost everyday cuz i can never wake up on tme :$ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah, LOVE IT! lol... you wrote this amazingly. some spelling errors and plenty of grammar errors :-) but it was still freaking amazing. maybe i'm just a bit of a perv but i got my hopes up for a little more action hehe... but really. awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D Much fun :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey - you're an Aussie :D Yay! Me2. I suspected so, but this chappie confirmed it. Enjoying the story so far :D |