oh i get it. shes afraid hell like her sister cause they have so much in common.

but shes bein a dope, hasnt she heard that 'opposites attract' too?

i agree... weird sister.

well, that took ages. I don't know why i've never read this before. I think i tried reading it like three times, but after the first chapter i could never continue. Some things that ticked me off: Bronwyn seems a bit too self-less. Ok maybe there are some people out there who are self less, but only to an extent. I didnt feel like we were exposed to many of her flaws, except maybe her guilt over liking her sister's boyfriend.

And something else that bothered me for ages was the fact that she is 16 and she can drive her own car already. But then i realised you wrote this in 2007 before the rules changed, so i guess its just i'm annoyed because now we have to wait like a year and get 120 hours of driving before getting out Ps.

Still, I believe that no matter the boy, girls should never go for their sister's boyfriends, but in this story i think it was ok because of the way you presented the idea and developed it. Seeing how this story's three years old, you probably don't care any more, but i think this was a good story.

and so it ends! lmao. loved it! you are of the awesome dude! (Y)

'he was in the same position'! COBIE LIKES AMBER! :O

i was waiting to kind of confirm it, but i think its safe to say that im pretty sure Emery is Opals other brother. OMG if his full name is emerald or something im gonna die of laughter :L

can you cyber-punch amber for me? please? and why is she trying to be so different? gah! woot, fellow aussie! loll love it!

LOL at Matt :L love the story!

Yea! That was awesome!

i loved this story, but i felt really bad for the sister :)

When I first started this story, I wasn't sure about it. I don't know either, but when I realized, pretty quickly I might add, that my fears were definitely unfounded.

I loved Matt and his quirkiness. And I loved how Bronwyn felt like a character that I could relate to. I don't have a sister, so I don't know exactly how she was feeling, but I had the same feelings about friends ex-boyfriends, so we have some common ground.

There were so many things right with this story, and I could go on pretty much forever, but that would take awhile. So, suffice to say I ended up loving this.

Squee! I loved this story so much. I was first unsure about whether it would be good or not, bit after the couple chapters, I was hooked. Finished it all today.

aww so cute :) great ending!

aw i love this story so much!

I can't believe it's over, what a great ending though.

I totally did NOT suspect Emery to be Cobe and Opal's brother.

Great story, glad a read it.

Well done :D

I love this story :D