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Let me start of by mentioning I hate love triangles. Their awkward, painful to read as someone is always left hurt in the end and usually the contenders are really endearing and likeable characters, therefore making it impossible to finish the story content that everyone got their happy ending. HOWEVER, I really liked this story. The expectation and the fate-like circumstances of Emery and Bronwyn's relationship made the conclusion of this story more than acceptable. People like Cobe and Amber were left broken and sort of alone, but they could accept that their siblings relationship was meant to be. I had been meaning to read this story and I was glad I did. The chemistry throughout the story was exemplary. I like that the story also revolved around the relationship between the sisters. Many people were disgusted and intollerant of Amber's behaviour, but I could see where she was coming from. She really liked him and wanted the relationship to work between herself and Emery. It may have been a very selfish act in keeping Emery and her sister apart but in the end she acceptes where relationship with him is at. I thought it was also really respectful of Bronwyn, to attempt to keep out of her sister's relationship. It was a selfless act and real illustration of how she didn't want to alienate her sister further. One little portion of criticism: I think in the begining it could be worthwhile, elaborating on Bronwyn's social life. Amber complained that she never saw her sister, and when I read that story I don't remember ever reading about Bronwyn standing up her sister or being not present for family activities. I don't think you wanted to make it seem Amber fabricated the lies (at least from my perspective). But let me just say that this story is amazing and a really captivating read.

Thank you for sharing it to us on FictionPress,

desmoulins.

Wow. I just finished reading this amazing story in about... 4 hours. And I loved it! Of course every time I read a story I feel bad for the other people.. You know like Cobe, because he's a great guy and he deserves someone good. And he's hot. I would love to see a story written about him, although I know writers can't just make it up on the spot! But it would be lovely to see his story someday! Also I know it's a weird request but if you wrote a story about... I'm drawing a blank on their names. (That's what happens when you read for four hours straight!) The two preschoolers who fight all the time. Obviously when their older... but they do seem like the type who would "secretly like each other".

Anyways I will definitely be looking out for more of your stories!

-Dezzie

Amber is a Bitch. I hate her. I have hated her since chappie 1, But have now decided that she is the devils spawn. Jesus.

Not my favorite. I liked Bronwyn and Emery's relationship, but thought Bronwyn and Amber's was very dysfunctional. I find it creepy that anyone would be interested in their sister's boyfriend and can't understand why Bronwyn put up with Amber's shit.

Love this story, second time reading it and I never get tired of reading it! Thanks for sharing it! :D Can't wait to read more of your stories! :D Keep up the good work! :D

Great story, really enjoyed it.

Ohh gasp! I am apsolutely in love with his story now simply because you mentioned sufjan Stevens! Omrhgez! You have amazing taste in music apparently! XD

Brilliant story. Extremely refreshing, with awesome characters (although her cluelessness got a little annoying near the start). I really enjoyed the story, and was overjoyed at finding another story set in Australia... which reminds me, I kinda need to sleep, since it's midnight...

Thanks for posting :P

Loved the story! I was waiting for forever for Amber to fine get a grip on things and realize that her sister needed to be with Emery! Great ending.

Aww! Seriously, that was just SO cute! I really, really loved this story :) :)

Oh my god Emery is Cobe and Opal's brother isn't he?

a) ages ago when Nathan was talking to Bronwyn and was like 'Oh I know EJ or JJ' (or something along those lines) he was referring to Emery and JACKY begins with a J. Maybe I'm completely wrong and reading too much into it XD

and

b) 'His girlfriend is kind of possessive' that sounds a BIT like Amber XD Ah well, I'm usually wrong about these kinda things but I THINK that's where it's headed. Or Emery is somehow involved with Cobe and Opal.

ANYWAY, sorry for that long rant about my different theories XD I really love this story and am off to read some more now! :)

Okay, so I'm not someone who reads 'T' rated anything- because usually it's filled with poorly written, cliche, uninteresting spin-offs of Twilight (nothing against it, just seeing it everywhere it slightly annoying), and such. Though I thought I'd give this one a try because it was in the community for 'best of the best' or something like that. I didn't think I'd like it, also because it was a straight relationship, Hurhurhur~ I'm a slash fan, but after reading the first chapter I was BLOWN AWAY. Well written, interesting right from the start, and characters I got all giddy about. Honestly at times I would laugh out loud at the funny parts, and some others had me crying. My mom even asked me if I was okay at one point. .;; It was awkward.

ANYWAYS- I LOVED THIS STORY MORE THAN ANYTHING I HAVE EVER READ. Let me tell you that I have read a lot, on , fictionpress, and of course IRL books (I'm a bookworm). SO CONGRATS ON GRABBING MY ATTENTION! 8D Consider yourself awesome, cause I've never read a straight pairing story online and truly felt connected with the characters. YOU SHOULD GET THIS PUBLISHED. RIGHT NOW.

SO YEAH THAT'S ME SAYING YOU'RE AWESOME AND I LOVE YOUR STORY! BYES!~

So cute. I loved it to the end even though Amber was such a bitch, but she saw it coming.

Ooh, she is acting WIERD. Sufjan Stevens is pretty good... by the way.