I LOVED this story & I'm so sorry tht I ddnt review the other chapters :( I hope u can 4give me

That was a really enjoyable read. Thanks!

I really like your ending. You took a typical cliche, added another few, and turned it into something sweetly different. Your characters were more towards "real" than the "archetypal" that usually come with this story. There were no grandiose declarations and it was a lot like watching something happen in high school.

I think you need to clean it up a bit, there were a few typos with spelling and punctuation. Also, you can make some of the narrative a little clearer.

Overall, this was a worthwhile and enjoyable read. :)

The one thing I've been curious about is why Wyn is keeping all of this to herself. Andrea is there and I'm surprised they don't talk about Amber's promise and insecurities.

This has got to be one of the most original love triangles I have ever seen. It's interesting that a lot of it is more about the sisters' relationship and less about Wyn falling for Emery, which though she has a crush on him I don't see as an epic threat to Amber.

This is my all time favorite story. Its sad how much in love with Emery I am. I want a guy like him for myself! I'm so happy you wrote it and reread it all the time. Sometimes I get a little envious of Bronny, which is very very sad. I just want to thank you for writing this!

I Love It!

Margaret S.

aw. wynn doesnt want to be with emery cause she would be betraying her sister and she loves her sister no matter what even though she likes him a lot. and cobe doesnt want to be with wynn because he would be betraying his brother even though he likes her a lot. D:

no cobe but i llike cobe COBE

i want to kill amber. shes such a little lying selfish whore. oh and a poser. winnie x emery forever.

I almost missed the bus to read this chapter but i tihnk it was worth it. I love this story, is was so awsome :D

You are seriously a literary and comic genius!

Okay so its 6.43am Aussie time and I just finished reading your story...yes it took all night I'm a slow reader okay?

I like the ending but the only issue is...if Amber were one of my sisters (I have two) I would bitch slap her! That was rrealy low of her to do! But I can see her perspective, her jealousy and how she though Bron was ignoring her in the first place.

I really fell in love though with each and every one of your characters (except for Amber, whom I feel a seething hate at the mere mention of her name :)...) But yes your charactarisation is superb, and you're jokes are hilarious.

Matt was so funny and reminded me of one of my freinds, Chris (I think we all have a friend like that lol). You're dialogue is very smart and witty and comical and overall I thouroughly enjoyed it and will be reading more from you.

I still think she should have punched her sister. Bloody brilliant read! :)

"who I remembered to be both partially blind and fully death"

death- deaf :)

This was a great story. It wasn;t to far fecthed or anything. It was real and the ending was so cute and perfect. Also there were no loose ends to tie up or anything or questions. Everything was answered. All in all a perfect story.

is there gonna be a another chapter soon or is it finished