BAH HAH - carrots are col

;)sammy

hm what is up with this Amber chick? I'm a tad confuzzled - lol

Bronwyn is cute XD

:) sam

hahaha that was funny undies LOL ;)

great begining cant wait till i get on to reading the rest

:) sammy

This is a review for the whole story...i love how realistic it is...so many of 'these' (i'm trying not to stereotype but do you know what i mean?) stories are just too over-the-top, in that there is too much plot and not enough character development, the characters don't seem real or in that the heroine is described as normal but magically has every guy falling for her at first sight.

I love how this story is subtle; it makes it more REAL, therefore more enjoyable. I love Bronny's character as well; she takes time to smell the flowers and has a heart of gold, but again, not so much that she seems fake. Love the style of the story too, made it easy and enjoyable to read...all in all, I loved this story! (proof is this is that I hardly EVER review stories!)

OH SNAP. Emery is a mineral. Jacky's not the brother's real name. I think I know where this is going... (And you just made me scream while I was reading!)

Such a good story! You had me laughing out loud at so many parts! Bronny seems like such a cool character but she sure did have to go through alot before she got what she deserved ]

I love this story! Its amazing.

It has the most awkward love triangle

ever but its hilariously funny.

Bronny's personality is just like mine.

so i could pretty much relate to everything

that happened to her.

BTW- love you taste i music- im downloading

all of the song.

Thanks. :)

I just finished reading, and thought you'd appreciate some constructive criticism. One of the high points was definitely the interactions between Bronwyn and Emery. There weren't too many of them, but when they were there, they were good. Their interactions seemed very honest. The only thing I could really say needed some work was Amber's character. Mostly, she served the sole purpose of creating conflict, which meant her characterization was somewhat lacking (and, she was insufferable). Other than that, a really enjoyable read. Keep it up.

Aw that was sweet, loved it! One of the best love trianlges ive ever read!

This story is by far the most emotionally intense and emotionally REAL story I've read on here. You did a GREAT job building up the story and every single event fit in so PERFECTLY. GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPEMENT. And I just can't get enough of Emery and the way you described him xD I love the way you showed how even though some people seem to be aggressive and cruel, everyone has a story to tell and every callous command comes from something bigger - like with Amber.

Uh, basically, the story was AMAZZING )xD

OH and the way you subtley infused music into everything was awesome, like maybe with Emery's name, but I'm not sure if that's why you named him that ._. & you have GREATT TASTE IN MUSICC!

I LOVE MATT! (yeah emery's great too, but Matt's pretty awesome!)

For one, I must say this was beyond amazing and seriously the best story I've read in well, forever. I feel guilty saying this but I usually don't review but reading this it was way to tempting and I just had to review. I have to tell you how amazing this stories and how you MUST get it published. I'd buy it and recommend it to my friends. :)

Loved it!

:D Started and finished it today

Made me laugh more than a few times

Seriously though great story

You're a really good writer and I can't wait to read more of your stuff

:D

i can tell i'm going to like this story. ;)

riley

BRAVO! i loved the story! i finally read all of it! yay! :)