Aww... the end is so cute! I started reading this because it was sort of a mystery. I had to find out what was going to happen! Nice job. You kept me on my toes. Sort of. Yay!

i really was wishing she would just get shot. no joke. but after the convo with E-man (haha) i GUESS it's ok that they ended up together.

AND THERE SHE GOES AGAIN! WHAT IS IT WITH HER AND LYING-she's only making it worse. whatever. she totally doesn't deserve Emery anymore.

seriously? are you kidding me? she said WHAT to B? her own sister? awe hell no. that bitch is going down. if she seriously was my sister she already would have been beat the shit out of. i wouldn't take that kind of shit from anyone especially family. fuck that shit.

this is probably like the 3rd time i have read this story..i love this story a lot...i want an emery!

that was... weird. great first impression hehe

ah. I loved this story. I think I like it better than Walls Apart. Seeing how, I've already read this one about three times. I love Emery & Bronwyn! They are perfect for eachother. Great job with this :]

hey just wanted to say that i loved the story. don't have a fictionpress profile yet - so anonymous it is. )

great story (even though i really wanted to kill Amber a couple of times. i hate girls who change their personality to "impress" guys). anywho, absolutely loved it. my only critique would be that it could have had a little more fluff at the ending they deserved it after 18 chapters. haha.

(oh, and if you ever find a Cobe in real life? Send him my away

This was such a lovely story! The plot overall was just great, and as I've been reading I've also been trying to think of a review to write. And even as I'm done now I still can't think of proper words to tell you how much I enjoyed your story, and how late I stayed up to read it before I knew I was going to pass out! Haha. The conflicts within Bronny were really believable, as frustrating as it may be sometimes we just want everyone to be happy even if it means being selfless. I really didn't like Amber, with the way she treated Bronny so harshly. But glad that at the end, she realized her wrongs and let Bronny be happy. Her and Emery sound like such a sweet couple, and I'm just so happy right now bahaha. The ending line was simply fantastic :) You did an amazing job, and I love your way of writing. Thank you for a great read! :D

OMG! Lovely last line xD

Great story! I loved all of the characters, and couldn't stop reading. Really sweet ending, they deserved it.

This was such a fantastic story! (I just read through all of it. I couldn't stop.) We sympathize with *all* the characters, and even though I could figure out everything, it was still a very high tension point (like Emery being Jackie and why Amber made them avoid each other). I don't mind the... clicheness, I guess, because you did it so well and originally. This was just...amazing. I really liked reading this. (: It was totally worth reading all the way through for. (:

Pheu! That was dramatic! I felt so bad for the sisters, though Amber was being a right bitch at times.

I loved that character Cobe! I thought at first they would pull that switchy thing with the guys - like trade 'em? - but figured that might be to classic... lol.

I liked it, great job!

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Aw, I really enjoyed your story! Really loved the couch jumping scene- and the elevator one too ) It might've made a little more sense for Opal to nickname Bronwyn, "Winnie" (or some other spelling variation) since Amber uses "Bronny" (I thought she used it when Emery was around, but maybe not). And "Winnie" would be easier for a child to say. But in any case, love how everything came together at the end ) Though I was somewhat hoping that Cobe and Amber could get together at the end P

Keep up the good work!