Reviews for Emery & Me
lanagon39 chapter 13 . 11/10/2012
Totally called it.
lanagon39 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
WOW! And I thought I had read through all the popular stories here. I have no idea how I missed this one for so long, but I'm definitely enjoying it! :)
leavesfallingup chapter 18 . 11/7/2012
An excellent story. A great deal of teen angst... often to the point that it made me want to bounce my head off of a wall, but still believable and heartwarming at the end. Great job!
leavesfallingup chapter 17 . 11/7/2012
I don't think that lying to her sister was the right way to resolve the issue. The truth would have been better. But I can also understand why she would feel desperate to win her sister back.
leavesfallingup chapter 16 . 11/7/2012
Mom is great. She saw right into the heart of the matter and was able to help... but if she saw this happening from the beginning, why didn't she ever try to speak with Amber?
leavesfallingup chapter 15 . 11/7/2012
Then again, she could choose to stay away from Emery and remain loyal to her sister. Family is forever. There would be other guys. But teen angst and hormones don't easily understand those simple truths.
leavesfallingup chapter 14 . 11/7/2012
Wow, what a confusing mess to have to deal with. And worse, to suddenly find yourself involuntarily in the middle of a conflict that you had nothing to do with creating. I think maybe I would buy an airplane ticket to anywhere and tell everyone to call me once they had it all worked out.
leavesfallingup chapter 12 . 11/7/2012
The harder she holds on, the more he will slip away. And in the process she will destroy her other relationships as well. This sort of thing really does happen, which makes this story even sadder.
leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 11/7/2012
This is getting complicated. No matter what she does, Emery keeps showing up.
leavesfallingup chapter 10 . 11/7/2012
Amber has serious issues. Both sisters think that the other "always gets what she wants." I'm inclined to believe Bron... but that's only natural, since she is the narrator. But Amber was obviously stuck on this even before Bron met the guy. Where is this going and when will something be resolved?
leavesfallingup chapter 9 . 11/7/2012
This guy is hilarious: I think that you're as pretty as my teeth! That has to be the corniest line in human history.
leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 11/7/2012
Running off to do drugs, however, means that he isn't as much like her as one might suppose. Too bad. You might disagree with me, but he has now slipped into the loser category.
leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 11/7/2012
This does not promise good things. Question: If Bronnie is a senior and Amber is older, then why is she still in school?
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 11/7/2012
Why do I have the sinking feeling that "Jackie" is "Emery"?
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 11/7/2012
I suspect, at least in real life, that Emery and Amber wouldn't last long. Earlier I wrote that opposites attract... but sometimes they act like matter and anti-matter.
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