|Reviews for Emery & Me|
| ihrtbks chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
So they bonded over white jelly beans. Looks like Amber doesn't want to make a bad impression about how she treats her sister in front of her boyfriend. Congratulations on all the reviews; you've got an eyecatching summary.
| PapillonLove chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
Wow what is going on here? I know whats wrong with amber she thinks wyn is gonna take emery right?
| xonea chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
Amber is freaky.
why is she like that? i think she's embarrased of her sister or something?
hmm..would we ever find out?
| emotionless-stares chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
...why is Amber like that?..hm...still wondering...Update soon!
| R.F.Y chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
i like it so far! what is up with amber anyway? i agree with Bronwyn, amber's a bit off. emery seems nice though. i love your character personalities, they are very original.
| OoohLookACat chapter 3 . 6/1/2007
amber thinks that emery and bronwyn will get along TOO well
and they'll get together?
anything CLOSE to right?
well doesnt matter
coz i enjoy reading
can't wait for the next one
you're australian right?
| mOochi chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
Hi, normally I don't submit reviews but I thought this could be a special case :) (it won't be that good though heh)
Anyway, even though there are only two chapters out right now, I have to say this story seems to have a lot of potential. You write quite humorously as well :)
I just wanted to tell you that I like this story and I encourage you to continue it (reviews will come naturally :))
PS. Sufjan Stevens rocks ! :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
Wow, this is an awesome story! Humor and so much mystery it's driving me insane already! This an awesome story and I can't wait to read more of it!
| the high-five revolution chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
Amber is getting pretty suspicious! Haha, and Sufjan Stevens love! Sigh. Well done! I am eager to read the next chapter.
| ihrtbks chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
I get it! Emery likes it; Amber was just trying to get to know him a little in a roundabout way! If I were to assume Amber would get very upset when she sees how Brownyn stole her boyfriend (kind of sort of not really), would I be right, or am I assuming too much!
| tornangelwings chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
THIS IS REALLY AND I MEAN REALLY GOOD. KEEP IT UP I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE SOON, EVEN THOUGH IKNOW HOW LONG UPDATES TAKE, ANYWHOO GEAT JOB
| PapillonLove chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
| flojo22811 chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
keep writing! i wnt to know what's up with amber and emery... very mysterious!
| rockMus chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
good first chapter. i like how there was a bit of suspense like wanting to kno wat was gonna happen nxt. keep writing!
| akb-inactive chapter 2 . 5/30/2007
There's something I really love about your writing. It's like, I'm reading a REAL book, you know? Because whenever I read a story here on Fictionpress - I get the obvious, amateur, online-story feeling when I read it. But when I read your work, it's seriously like I'm reading a real, hardcover book in front of me. Your work feels so professional.
Great job. :D