Reviews for Emery & Me
PrettyBadass chapter 18 . 11/6/2011
I just finished reading your story and its so beautiful :)

And I swear your taste in music is absolutely wonderful! 3

Awesome story, excellent writer.

you're amazing. :)
Gespry-Locksley chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
I'm loving the slow build up between Bronn and Emery. Also loving the use of "accidently on purpose."
mallow.puff chapter 18 . 9/8/2011
This was amazeballs! Being Aussie, it's awesome how this is set in that scene. That's why I liked it so much cause I felt so familiar with it. Loved it! But wish it was longer :P
little.artist chapter 18 . 8/22/2011
I loved, loved, loved this story! So sweet and beautiful and not quite perfect (but perfect enough for me :D). I'm so shocked by how realistic this story seems - nothing was too cliched and I could totally imagine BEING Bronwyn. Her character - and the charaters of Amber, Emery etc are all so...HUMAN.

The sisterly love/hate reltionship made me want to cry - it seemed all so possible. I don't have a sister, but when I have an argument with my brothers, it's the worst feeling ever :(

Anyway, you totally deserve more reviews! BRILLIANT.
stephaniee chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
loved it :)
Aradia Cloud chapter 13 . 7/26/2011
Get a bleeping life, Amber. Stupid little girl. I hate her. I really do.
Aradia Cloud chapter 10 . 7/26/2011
Amber, oh... oh Amber. Glad I don't have a sister like you.

I would have tackled her from like Ten Chapter ago, no lie.
Aradia Cloud chapter 8 . 7/26/2011
I don't like Amber.
MindaAnn chapter 18 . 7/13/2011
I love the story, especially the songs included with it.
La Cocaina chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
The usuals were there thought.(ch.4)

should be, were there though

"Then!" she said more fiercely. (ch.4)

should be, "Them!"

"Why should it be any business?" I asked as I looked back to him. (ch.4)

Why should it be any OF MY business?

"I noticed the look on the face when you saw me on the roof. (ch.4)

look on YOUR face

"But hopefully not in room, alright?" (ch.4)

hopefully not in (MY/AMBER'S?) room

We stood in silence for a long moment, staring at the pattern on the floor. (ch.5)

Do you mean, pattern on the wall?

walking my dresser and picking up a glass jar full of loose change. (ch.5)

walking OVER TO my dresser

It was only when he gone that I realised I had broken my promise to Amber once again. (CH.5) only when he HAD gone

I've noticed things are picking up and I think I have a clue as to what's going on with Amber even if I don't really like Emery, but I do like this name though, good choice!
La Cocaina chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
It's it so special I'm not even allowed to like it, or what? (ch.2)

I believe you meant, IS it so special -

I'm really liking this so far... even though I have no idea where this is going.
Cheryl White chapter 18 . 6/10/2011

That was AWESOME.

Charlee Rayne chapter 18 . 6/2/2011
no 'and they got married with tons of kids and lived happily ever after. oh, and amber got with Cobe and lived happily ever after too?'
Charlee Rayne chapter 9 . 6/2/2011
Libby Faucet chapter 18 . 5/31/2011
Okay. W.O.W.
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