Reviews for Sacrifice
HFGLF 2 chapter 8 . 2/21/2014
Keiji got seriously burned and now I have a lovely image of a very naked and sexy Hiroshima. Hiroshima and Tsurugi seem to be stalking them for whatever reason. They are random but fun.

Keiji and Fife also had a serious meeting of the minds so to speak and Fife decided to let Keiji have a piece of his.

I knew that Kabuto had been hiding things from him about the dark bride, the only question now it what...
HFGLF 2 chapter 7 . 2/21/2014
Another fantastic chapter to start off my day. I love the suspense and mystery in this chapter and the interactions of Keiji Azmy and Chichiri and Ohanna. I hope everyone can get there in time to save him.
HFGLF 2 chapter 6 . 2/21/2014
The constant scene changing was rather annoying so I'm glad that most everyone was brought together by the end of the chapter. There are a lot of cast memebers to keep up with and I had a hard time but then again I was also so engrossed in what was happening that I managed to understand it all as well and take in the important factors that was going on.

Something is up with Kabuto and Ohanna. They seem way too friendly, almost like they are in cahoots or something deeper...

Ko's jealously has struck me again and once more, I think she likes Chichiri more then she says.

Suprisingly enough, I like FifeXKeiji for some reason. They are the first yaoi couple I've ever liked...And here I was saying that I'd not like anything shounen-ai...Guess I was wrong.

I do hope Azmy will be alright but unfortunately I'll have to read it tomorrow because I must get back to work. This story is rather addicting and I can't wait to read more!
HFGLF 2 chapter 5 . 2/21/2014
A lot of things to point out here. Kabuto is definitely interesting but I go for the stoic creepy types.

The remark about cheap porn was funny. Ko certainly seems jealous when Chichiri looks at other women. I wonder if there may be something deeper going on between the two of them that isn't outright said...Maybe they are boyfriend and girlfriend.

Azmy's character is alright but I don't know enough about her to judge what she's really like.

I really like the whole dark bride thing. It seems really interesting and I'll definitely look forward to reading more of this arc.
HFGLF 2 chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
I wonder what Hiroshima meant by his 'They may just have the potential that I'm looking for' comment in this chapter.

There was a lot of dialouge here, even though it was interesting the description didn't match up to it. The hospital thing seems plausible. I don't think anyone cared about sanity, just about treating Fife before he died.

I wonder what the Old Victorian House has to do with anything as well...
HFGLF 2 chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
I really liked Ko's song at the beginning, or rather a piece of a song. You're really good at writing songs and poems. I could also picture the Rose Hip Club very vividly and I had a very nice picture in my head as the music played.

This chapter was very horror-esque. This work reminds me a lot of Tragic Play X as well. Hiroshima is so evil and Tsurugi definitely caniving for pointing them in the direction of a hospital that they had already destroyed.

I feel sorry for Fife and I really like the little moments that he and Keiji shared in this chapter. I'm beginning to like them as a couple.
HFGLF 2 chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
This was a lot different from your newer stuff like Sumiko-chan and Alice in Chains. It's odd to see this style considering yours has changed so much. You've learned to describe your dialouge better as well.

I love where this is going and I'd comment on more but I'm pressed for time. I must go before my boss kills me.

See you!
HFGLF 2 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
I've been reading your works for a while and I decided to check out this one since it seems to be THE story that you were famed for.

I don't usually read shounen-ai but I heard there were straight couples in this as well so I think I'll give it a try. Shoujo-ai creeps me out though as a straight woman who has two kids ; I just don't see how...But that's my issue.

I rather like this little prolouge. It's gives us a taste of what's to come. Your stories are always so interesting and I hope that I'll enjoy this one just as much as I do your other works.
King Corn chapter 99 . 2/14/2014
So, Vespa wants to destroy Domina and everyone was helping? But why? I hope you update again!
King Corn chapter 98 . 2/14/2014
This chapter is freaking amazing! I love your action and all the junk with Azmy is just awesome. You really made her into something great!
King Corn chapter 97 . 2/14/2014
Personally, I think Zell is adorable.
King Corn chapter 96 . 2/14/2014
A new arc freaking sweet i think I'll like this one.
King Corn chapter 95 . 2/14/2014
YEAH YOU GO KO KICK HIS ASS!
King Corn chapter 94 . 2/14/2014
Man, poor Ko. I feel bad for her.
King Corn chapter 93 . 2/14/2014
Undine has a bigger purpose than I thought she did. I was wondering about her character for a while but up until recently I've completely forgotten about her.
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