|Reviews for Sacrifice|
| HFGLF 2 chapter 54 . 2/21
Just the two of them...walking around...It must be akward for both of them. It was a nice chapter to answer some questions and loopholes that people had concerns with.
IT seems that Hiroshima really does try to cheat his own rules by helping them out in any way that he can. It seems to me like he's some sort of indentured servant to them. I have to wonder what exactly he is trying to do.
I like the interaction between the two of them. It seems that they are really forming a bond, but Hiroshima is laying down his boundaries as far as their relationship goes. He really wants her to get that they are simply friends.
I hope he can succeed.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 53 . 2/21
I liked the end of the fight between Azmy, Hiroshima and Remi. It was exciting and you definately make a good two exciting chapters.
Azmy's feelings really seem to be growing for him. I like how you developed it over time. First it was a fond feeling and good friendship and now I can just tell that she's in love with him but she seems to have some underlying problems *cough Tsurugi cough* as well as her own guilt and friendship towards him.
As to people's perception of this story. To be honest, judging from reviews I don't think that any two people take the story or it's characters in the same way.
I have to admire you for what you've managed to do. This story is very intricate and if you don't pay attention to the slightest bit of information, you can become lost. There are also several different leads that you can take when it comes to who they really are. You definitely keep both the story and characters interesting and I'm sure that this arc won't dissapoint.
Grand job on a beautifully written story.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 52 . 2/21
I've been reading through your reviews and I think someone should defend Hiroshima here.
Sure, he's an ass but look at his legend and how people view him. Granted, no one is supposed to be kind and accepting of him but they shouldn't have been kind to Fife for having the profession that he had either, espceially since it turned out that he killed his sister.
As far as what is and isn't the Anti-christ, who says it has to fit the Biblical descritpiion? It's HER story so if she wants him to be then let him be. I doubt that he is and I think it was thrown in to purely confuse the readers who are unaware of things like that.
Also, Hiroshima called them cowards for a good reason. They all COULD fight but they didn't chose to stay and help everyone out like they did in the Flora fight. I would have thought the same thing to be honest. Hiroshima is used to the battle experience so you have to take things from his POV as well. He IS the main character of this story and it states so in the summary, you don't like him then don't read this story. Honestly and this arc is Fife's Arc and it's in HIS country. I do believe that it SHOULD be about him.
I don't think that Hiroshima should have done anything as far as stating their weaknesses because he knew that they were strong enough to handle themselves. He believes in them and they bail on him but HE'S in the wrong?
Are you serious dude
As far as him God-Moding goes, I don't think he could. I think no matter how strong you are that you always have someone who can beat you in some way. Many of the cast members may have strengths that Hiroshima doesn't. Believe it or not I think he regards them highly and is dissapointed when they don't live up to par with his standards of them.
Also, about his angsty past. Who one really knows what he's been through so unless it's stated then no one should really open their mouth on his flaws. Why not pick the humans apart? It seems a little biist to me that's all and I felt that I should defend a very interesting and cool character.
He DOES have reasons for all that he does and what he thinks. I can see it, and it's too bad that others can't.
As for my review on this chapter. I liked your action and I'm glad that Azmy is fighting now. It seems that she really has potential when she's not beating herself up so much.
Good job! I'm behind you all the way!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 51 . 2/21
Azmy has a little crush I see. It's been growing for a while when I look at it, though. I wonder what underground tunnel that they have uncovered and what relevance it has to Baklavas armies. Maybe they used it to try and break into the castle. There are amny theories here.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 50 . 2/21
This wasn't really offensive. I just take it as an opinional. Those things are purely rumors passed on by other religions and when you think about it, it's something that makes everyone who has a religion a little prejudice. It might not be to the extent that Hiroshima was but it's one of the reasons that religion isn't a good subject to bring up at all.
I think Hiroshima has his reasons for hating Catholics (especially because he's friends with a vampire)so I just take as that really.
I do feel bad for Helix because he was offended about his religion and he happened to be one of the few Catholics who had pput aside the age-old theory of 'darkness and evil' being a vampire.
This whole chapter was actually rather interesting on many different levels as far as opinions went. Well, I think this review was long enough. Please keep writing and I'll review the next chapter.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 49 . 2/21
Someone dies and someone hooks up? Does Chichiri die? Is that why he doesn't have an arc?
I really like your demon-like characters and Sumeria itself. Where do you come up with the ideas for these places that they travel?
My favorite demon of the three is Zuri. She's really cool for no appearent reason. I don't know, she seems like a calm, collected woman. Kind of like Koryuu (whom I liked)
I wonder what Vasca's prophecy will have to do with why Fife is there and what the mass confusion is between Fife and his servants. It seems odd that their stories don't match up.
I also wonder about the other vamps as well. I wonder if they'll meet them at the castle or if they'l appear sooner then that.
Lol, Chichiri does seem to get strange luck with woman, doesn't he?
I look forward to your next chapter. I can't wait to see their efforts against the Catholic armies.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 48 . 2/21
Congrats on all of your reviews. This work desereves over 600 of them and probably more in my opinion.
I'm kind of shocked at Fife being a prince, more so then a vampire's son actually. He's rather dark-minded and even when he's smiling, he's thinking about other things.
I definitely look forward to your next chapter, and I will check out Crimson and Clover Chronicles. *bows and dissapears off into the morning*
| HFGLF 2 chapter 47 . 2/21
Congrats on the big 1600 reviews. It's unbelievable what success you've had here and this story definitely marked you as a respectable figure here.
On to my review...
This chapter was a little short but I suppose things happen. Your description was decent for as much dialouge as you had and you did a great job at portraying your characters. The Eagle fight was very tragic. I saw him dying either way and now I'm filled with questions about Fife. I too, wonder about Sumeria and what it will mean for him.
I wonder exactly Ko unearthed about Fife's past...
Well, I must go break is over and the boss is coming!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 46 . 2/21
Very good chapter and there are several things that are notable. Undine and Fife are note-worthy and they definitely stick out and they do seem like they have their own, independant plan going on behind everyone's back. I wonder what they are conspiring to do.
I like the Ceres fight and Eagle and Koryuu are definitely awesome but I think that little mistake the Koryuu just made would really cost the team.
I hope Fife can pull through for everyone and I definitely think that something big will go down next chapter! I can't wait!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 45 . 2/21
This seemed a little rushed in parts but other then that, it was really good. I think that you could have taken more time with description on some things but other then that I loved the interaction of Eagle and Koryuu as well as some of the TsurugiHiroshima action here.
You can really tell how much of a good couple they are. I wonder how long it will be before we actually have a confrontation with the other baddies like Eclipse and Zangeif.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 44 . 2/21
This arc definitely seems sad. I love the way you decribe things and the senses that you put into the human emotion. This was a fantastic chapter and I can't wait to see what happens between Undine and Eagle.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 43 . 2/21
Wow, after all of that time, I finally caught up with your updates! I didn't ever think that I'd do that. *hints* Weren't you supposed to update this week? *nudge nudge* I really loved this arc and I hope your next one will be equally exciting! You've definitely improved!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 42 . 2/21
This is, by far my favorite arc. I love how you've composed it and each chapter leaves me wanting more. I feel bad for Ko and Zangetsu and I hope she'll be saved. I really don't want her to die.
| HFGLF 2 chapter 41 . 2/21
This chapter was action-packed and very gripping! It had me at the edge of my seat the whole time! It was very powerful and the water scene was magnificent! I hope everyone will be alright! Poor Fife and Keiji!
| HFGLF 2 chapter 40 . 2/21
Another Arc, how interesting this one seems to be. I wonder what Zangetsu has up his sleeve for our anti-heroes...I look forward to his fight with Undine