Reviews for Time
Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
I'm honestly wishing my time at school would go slower, for after I leave, I don't know when I'll see a friend of mine again; that's one friendship that I don't want to lose.

I'm not the only one who thinks ryhyming isn't necessary! Yay! Haha, but this one wasn't bad, I don't think. This poem holds itself together very well, and the words aren't just empty pasted on the page; there's meaning behind them. Great poem!
Militant Poet chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
This is a great poem, I like your style a lot. The ideas you play with here are excellent, and made me stop and think.
Greenfire42 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Time can be good and bad.

It depends on the situation

It's manily bad but, we need it to live.
dzkdreamer chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Yes i also agree that the rhyming doesn't fit too well, but it's a REALLY GOOD poem. XD
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
You might do better if you lose the rhyme. Poetry can be whatever you want, but from reading this I think you'd make some good non-rhyming works. Nice piece though.

Keep writing,

Alan.