|Reviews for Hands, Obey Me|
| Fragile Things chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
sad and a poem i think that shows truth. not as bold as it could have been but its nice.
| Lyrena chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
I like the repetition.
| flashlitdarknessxx chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
i really like this! I especially like the title being repeated!
| Kate Collinson chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I loved it. I thought it was a very powerfull story inside the poem.
| Lionstrom chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Very cool. If this is a free verse poem, excellent job.
But if it is not:
THe rhythm is very...er...jumbled. PAy attention to syllables per line, it can make all the difference.