Reviews for your side of the moon
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
I really liked this. Why? I'm not sure...

I liked that it was sad, but at the same time, powerful. The format (i.e. bolded words) worked really well too.
she smolders chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
I love how the words you bolded make them stand out and mean so much more. This was just lovely especially how you describe things in such a way that it makes cry.
Faded-once-again chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
loved it.
winteria chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
nice.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I more than adored this. This is how I feel right at this moment, maybe with a little more resentment, but wow. I loved this. It was wonderful. Great job!
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I wonder if it would amuse you to know that I'm smiling. The bitterness in here is tangible. I love the use of 'sugar'. It definitely adds to the feeling. I love the dark sentiment of it all- 'i hope that your side of the moon is darker than mine.' I can just *hear* someone spitting that at someone else who didn't even give them a chance whether out of fear, whatever. Awesome.
lymli chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I like your poem, it's so powerful.
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
i like this. the metaphor thing is very original.