| Reviews for By The Moon |
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   aircutter360 chapter 13 . 10/18/2013 This is a great story. I hope to read more soon. |
| OrangeKiss chapter 13 . 6/17/2012 Hey! This story is amazing. Please continue writing! I noticed it was 5 years ago when this story was last updated, but we, your readers, are still very much hoping for your next chapter. Please, write more for this. Thank you. -OrangeKiss |
| The Critic chapter 13 . 9/3/2011 The summary is very misleading. "Protected by one pack sought after by another." 1. I don't see this girl being searched for by another pack, and there are no REAL scenes that show her being protected. "The King of the Lykae will stop at nothing to have the perfect mate." 2. He already got her and she doesn't show any progress of trying to leave/escape. Your sentence tells the reader that the girl doesn't want to go or be with the Lykae king. These two sentences are the main reason why I wanted to check out this story in the first place. I don't want to sound mean or "flaming' but I was very disappointed to find out that the summary, at least to me, was misleading. |
| SecretRose88 chapter 13 . 12/10/2010 Well, she's doing a lot better than I would be. I probably would have used the clothes he gave me to try to strangle him or to tie a noose for myself. Even little old human me wouldn't want to be stuck in a cage. |
| Panda Blitz chapter 13 . 1/5/2010 Enough of the damn cages! I would flip if I was locked in a room! I love the story! please update soon! |
| smurf-love chapter 13 . 12/4/2009 haha i love this story, i will enjoy reading the chapters to come... ~smurf~ |
| M.Bianca chapter 13 . 10/23/2009 there's something called spell check. use it! |
| Arisa chapter 13 . 10/22/2009 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't give up on this story! |
| A-No-Knee-Moose chapter 13 . 9/19/2009 oh my word i just saw your last update date. PLEASE dont let this die this fic is amazing and i would worship the words you type. i sound freaky, okay wahtever. PLEASE UPDATE i am addicted, i love your writing style. you have a talent |
| MaxMcDowell chapter 13 . 9/4/2009 Please Up date soon I really can't wait to read more. (I have been waiting for a long time too) :( |
| Kirsten chapter 1 . 8/5/2009 i've recently begun to read your story 'By the Moon' and so far it's wonderful! i hope you continue it; please do :) |
| Isabella Western chapter 13 . 6/27/2009 COOL |
| Deanna-Marie chapter 1 . 3/12/2009 Lovely. I laughed a little at the names, hope you don't mind. They were pleasantly unusual. But the name Gau made me laugh. The first time I read it, I said 'goo' D Nicely written. I would love to see more description and setting detail. Otherwise, it’s lovely. Keep writing -Deanna |
| KittyKatLover chapter 12 . 1/11/2009 I can't believe I just got really into this story and you stopped updating it over a year ago!... Please please please magically come back and update! |
| KittyKatLover chapter 13 . 1/11/2009 Very good so far... update soon! |