It was beautiful and not at all cheesy!

Okay maybe a little but I loved it! (:

Keep writing! :D

-RE

that was just so sad :( but i really like how you gave life to each character of the story ! nice work there :)

damn it. i hate sad endings. but it was good. :)

It was really good, until the ending, which made me feel horrible and teary eyed...

God this was adorable.

I love your writing style :D and great character development. You seem to be good at that within one shots! Haha :D

I loved it.

Holy shit, was that sad or what!

D; Honestly, it wasn't that corny.

But it was really well-written and genius, baby!

Beautiful. :)

Beautiful story!

xx

Very sweet story. The ending made me want to cry.

This made me so sad...but it really was beautiful and touching.

"I still Love her."

-That line especially broke my heart...

You did such an amazing job with this one. :)

You suck. I loved it, but you SUCK. It was amazing, but you suck. I cried and you suck.

awhh. tragic..yes cheesy but lovely...

i don't know what i am feeling right now.

this is how i would really feel when some big character dies.. just like this book i read "A message in a bottle" by nicholas sparks.

tsk.

it feel so terrible..

nice.

oh

that's so sad

but i liked it

a lot

and i feel like i should cry or something

but i did like it - love it

its a sweet story

i still feel like i should cry

good job!

izzie

its sweet, :D oh and 26th july is my birthday, wowh. hahaha

How incredibly sad. Beautiful though...and yes, slightly cheesy. But, still. I adored Jeremiah. He's amusing and annoying and a very fun character.

This story is a definite favorite. I'm so glad that I found it.

CHEERS!

~Jeni

It's a bit cheesy, but it's not bad. I've read worse. no, just kidding. it's nice. Haha. :D no, seriously, it's sweet. But the last part is sad.