|Reviews for Only Fools|
| heart shaped lies chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
I liked this. Everyone has gone through this phase once in their life and it's nice to see it written so well. I loved the little descriptions of how she felt about everything and how she wouldn't let go. However one thing: you seem to change the story from first to third person in the middle. Was that intentional or...? Anyway, loved this piece. Keep it up!
| Krystal Watters chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
fascinating. Its so mysterious in the way you hold things back for just the right moment to say them. Very nice. And i have deffinitely been in those same shoes