Reviews for Welcome to my Closet
IamMiel chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
They probably get an A if they tell their story. ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
What type of teacher has her kids learning about Yaoi?
YAOI.FTW chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
that was awesome, good read :D i found it very funny :)
spacedoutghost chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
D'aw :D
RawrHappi chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Okie, it was really good, I'm a fan of stuff like this. But you need to watch out for little grammar mistakes. Other than that I loved it though!
lalapop chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
holy hotness.. that was awesome
Poptart Guava King chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
lmao if saying "it was very interesting" was their entire presentation. then they still deserve an A :P
a person chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
wut the fuck!
AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Oh my gosh! This is like the third time I've read this! IT'S JUST SO CUTE! So cliche but still really good. I kind of wish it was a completely long story instead of a one shot, but it's still awesome... Alec and Tie sound hot!
xXxX-Live.Laugh.Love-XxXx chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
That just totally turned me on.
utfan23456 chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
wow...that was
PQ chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
E! i want to know more about these two!
Akumaherutsu chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
i thought your story was very interesting. keep writing.
Ai.Therapy chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Well... okay, great concept, actually. You said he only wants to stick to his own kind, so shouldn't there have been a bit more of resentment and unwillingness than a couple lines? I think Tie gave in a bit too easy. I didn't create Tie, but he didn't seem the type to just straddle someones waist because he is attracted to him. I like the bluntness and honesty of some statements. It was too rushed... Work on how you form sentances more. I've seen alot of stories where it's just..

Eric does this. Tie does this. Eric then does this. Tie thought this, then feels this because Eric is doing this. It is like a checker game, just back and forth, back and forth. Maybe intervene with a thought, or a feel or something. It just seemed way too...rushed, I guess. Like it was a quick read, but it could have been better if it hadn't been such a quick read.

Also, if this is a prep..and emo world, wouldn't there have... Okay, so it's a oneshot. Nevermind. Some people don't spend as much time on a one shot as they would a full blown story.

I liked it, it just seemed kind of common.
eve chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
i thought it was very cute and though there were a few mistakes i still enjoyed the story very much! nice job.
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