Reviews for What If She's An Angel? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Still no new chapter :( *heart shatters I remember this story being one of the first story I fell inlove here in fictionpress. I hope you haven't fully given up on this story, because readers like me haven't! Hope you post son! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so when is she going to find out about katie? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very compelling story and you've done a very good job with the plot and the conflict. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story. Pls update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great story! If you update and stop procrastinating, everyone will be happy! (You might not procrastinate though...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this story. I like seeing the relationship between Julian and Travis slowly grow. I hope he tells her about Katie soon. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a really great story...i hope you update pretty soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOW CUTE IS THIS STORY! I love it soo much. Please Update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still reading but I can't believe that asshole hit her! What a prick and poor Travis, I get why he was so upset now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for agreing with me that horses are Evil! I am so glad the she learned how to cook, the food sounded delicious! What the heck happened to Katie? Oh and natasha should drown in a puddle of chocolate! Update Soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i just read this story and i completely love it. i hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this story is so good and I cannot wait to see what happens with Julian and Travis. It is really sad, what happened with Travis. I'm assuming that he was driving and there was an accident and his daughter, Katie, died. And he blames himself, and some other people blame him as well which has made it that much easier for him to blame himself. I feel like you have sort of rushed Julian's pregnancy, though. You essentially already had her popping out in, like, the second month or so. Even very slender women don't pop until about the fourth month. A friend of mine had twins, and she is very slender (she's a ballet dancer) and even she did not start to show until about midway through her third month. And a common sympton of twin pregnancies is that the woman shows sooner. So, is Julian having twins? I also feel like that baby started kicking a little early, as well. Women can feel the baby moving fairly early on, but the kicks that others can feel don't typically start until around week 16 or so. But other than that, I have enjoyed this story immensly. I look forward to the next chapter! Cheers! Gilly Bean |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. I DO THAT all the time! lol, Halo is actually fun.. sometimes. except i suck at it XD and natasha is getting a part in the story now :D haha. PLEASE UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was such a cute chap! I think they make the perfect couple! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahmgawsh. This story has got some MAJOR twists. |