Reviews for What If She's An Angel?
jacksy chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
brilliant narrative, excellent descriptions, you have a really good clear writing style here, and i really like the storyline thus far,

the only thing i would ask is that are you going to add abit more about others perspectives? as you did a little with Cameron, but it would be interesting to see more, just to give the story another dimension? or maybe that isnt crucial to it, but never mind, brilliant, i hope you update again soon :)

jacksyx
Dancing Phoenix chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Intresting.. I like Julian's problem, it's not one you usual see in stories. I would definently recomend dividing it into smaller chapter though, the formating is good but that much text at a time is very intimidating. The dialog was very realistic except with the mother.. that could use some work. Other than that it's awesome and I can't wait for an update! Great job!
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