Reviews for Walk With Me, My Love
Megami Chibi chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
absolutely beautiful. It portrays a really sweet and tender love, with promise of more to come. Maranwe, you really are my favorite author, next to my sister. You two tie for the lead ;P
hey maria chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Very stunning imagery.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
First off, I love the pattern of formatting you've got going here. It's very pretty and adds a lot of emphasis to the poem.

...I don't know if this was intentional, but I noticed that every other mention of your love was 'love' and the other alternating one was 'my love'. It was 'love'...'my love'...'love'...etc all throughout the poem. I liked that patterning. ...yeah, I know it's probably odd that I noticed such a small detail. But I really pay attention to the things I read.

"Songs of Faeries gae"-'Gae'? I'm lost there. O.o It's a prety line-but you lost me at 'gae.'

Oh, I love how you described the butterfly, what with it being a kiss on colored wings and such. Very beautiful and quite original, I think.

Wow. This was a wonderful poem and a pleasure to read! This definitely goes into my faves!