|Reviews for Writers and Liars|
| truth decays chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
they say words can't bleed, but
(trust me, darling)
they can cut
best line i've seen in a poem for quite sometime.
| siphoned afterglow chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
I lovelovelove it.
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
GORGEOUS. i love your message and it really made me feel good inside, even though the message is more ominous. i love how you compared tattoos to scars and how words won't ever bleed (though i disagree) but they can most certainly cut you (i do agree). amazing job and *favs*!
| CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
great poem! i love it.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
but uh "the black of gullible treachery." is a little too exaggerted and not rly beautiful- to me.
but i like how you started off the second stanza.
that's really a pretty cool way to think about it.
oh! and if you would have said who "they" is,
especially if you just did it in symbolism,
you could have added so much more meaning to this piece.
good job anyway.
| continuous brevity chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
oh my god. that was amazing. seriously one of the best poems i've read in a while. this has to be a favorite for sure. great work!