Reviews for Impossible Alliance
Danica Blake chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
K, I refuse to believe I'm the only one who read your story. You deserve a heck of a lot more reviews for this.

1. Great plot.

2. Sad sad sad ending that I actually didn't despise because it felt right.

3. Beautiful writing; nice flow, dialogue, descriptions etc. Fairly well polished.

4. Good imagination.

5. Believable characters with which you can empathize.

6. It's just very good!

Anyway, I read the whole thing through and didn't bother to stop and review until I finished. It was engrossing. While it's just saddening that Carlin and Derian just couldn't be, it makes sense. From the balls, to the battle scenes to random heart-wrenching moments or political intrigue, it was just written extremely well.

Well done.