|Reviews for Dual Kiss|
| CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
The ending was nice, I think. Whew, you stanzas are long!
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
I think I understood most of it.
| re x invented chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
the pacing in this one is intense. my mind couldn't keep up with as fast as my eyes wanted to read. i liked it. keep writing.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
There was a lot of emotion to that poem.
| Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
"So I started with something
Somewhat like innocence and
Ended up with an empty kiss that
Left my lips on fire"
Its just really amazing. I loved it.
| Militant Poet chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
I love this poem...it is revealing and real, there is something about it that gets me emotionally in this.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Gah, the first few lines in the third verse just completely break my heart. This is just amazing. Take care.