Reviews for Dual Kiss
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
The ending was nice, I think. Whew, you stanzas are long!

All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
I think I understood most of it.

Really emotional.

re x invented chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
the pacing in this one is intense. my mind couldn't keep up with as fast as my eyes wanted to read. i liked it. keep writing.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
There was a lot of emotion to that poem.

Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 5/31/2007

"So I started with something

Somewhat like innocence and

Ended up with an empty kiss that

Left my lips on fire"

Its just really amazing. I loved it.
Militant Poet chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
I love this is revealing and real, there is something about it that gets me emotionally in this.
she smolders chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Gah, the first few lines in the third verse just completely break my heart. This is just amazing. Take care.