This was great, and was a nice spin-off to the poem you mentioned. Your rhyming flowed great, as I always assure you it does. This one especially. I dunno, it just had beautiful flow to it. I was thinking of some poem ideas today so you may or may not see one soon. I'm still editing and erasing, so that process can be done in the next five minutes or the next five months.

Anyways, as always I look forward to anything you submit. Peace.

-Stewart