Reviews for Quattuor Aeris
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Very beautiful, with wonderful imagery, but if there's one thing it lacks is a solid emotion or feeling. You had a bit at the end, but overall it seemed missing. I'd suggest having something a bit more meaningful or powerful in between the pretty verses. For example, having a "full of feeling" stanza as the second, and sixth stanzas, giving you a seven stanza poem that would leave a greater impression, and a better one too. You've got a lovely piece here, but if you wanted to make it more, you could.