Reviews for Listen Baby
poetrypal chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
ooh i like this! the style is really cool and leaves for a sense of mystery in the middle of the piece. very nice!
queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
It's good to see you back here!

Great poem, I liked it a lot. My favourite lines were these: Listen Baby

Our verses are broken

Chorus jumbled

Meaning, unspoken

Great piece, hope to read more from you soon!