Reviews for Box of Dolls
What Happens Now chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I'm sorry the ending went over my head.

I liked the body language, it told more description about the characters than the actions did.

I also liked the open ended ending because it made the story last longer in my memory than it would if you had resolved it yourself.
LiberryBooked chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Ack gross! Last line should be the smell hovered in kelsey's room for days instead of hovers. I liked the way you didn't describe the end but implied it instead.