Reviews for Dont Forget, To Remember Me
Zeffe chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
This was beautiful. Oh so very...beautiful.

For some reason, Pirates of the Carribean kept popping into my head as I was reading this. And I thought, this would be the voice of all the women waiting on their pirates to return to them.

I thought...this is the voice of the lonely one left behind for another, time and time again.

Your writing has so much character and life to it here. The rhythm scheme was wonderful aswell. I read it straight through to the end and did not pause for a moment, save to savor the taste of your words.

This was a wonderful piece.

I do hope you'll keep up the good work and write more for me to inhale.

You are a great writer. Please don't ever doubt this.

Until next we meet,

Take care!
Jecori chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
I like this. I also like how you put this into words. Sounded peaceful, but meaningful in an subtly ansgty way. :)
Maisha Mafuriko chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Gorgous..absolutely gorgous writing..

Stories of the seashore...and love too...ever call out of ocean's depths to my soul.