Reviews for the year
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
Good poem.

Twilight Starr
zz00 chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Very nice once again. The imagery and euphony are superb. And, if I may veer off here, this can be seen not only as a metaphysical thing, but also as a symbol for a living person. I hope I'm not destroying your idea by saying this, but the poem coincides with the notion that a person is more than one aspect, or season, as it were, but rather a complex universe of contradictions, powers and weaknessness in themselves. We all have our winters and our summers, our moderates and extremes...really, this is a well-written poem. I'd only say to add more punctuation because it was a little hard to follow in certain lines and took a bit of re-reading. But still, well done.:) And thanks for the 2 reviews and reply.:)