|Reviews for watercolor days|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
i especially love the second line.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I added this to my favorite stories.
| theinfinitebee chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Out of pure curiousity, what's your favourite colour? Mine's blue.
Question prompted from the first line.
You said in your dA journal, "I don't call myself a poet, though I dream of being one." If I'm interpreting things correctly, that's radiating through this poem.
My favourite line has to be the first one, though I like all of it.
I love the title, by the way.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
wonderful imagery and feeling behind this. the last line really ends the piece perfectly.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
Beautiful poem. :D
| continuous brevity chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
beautiful imagery and fantastic word choice. great work!
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
really good imagery- i love the phrase "if i could, i'd paint this world blue"- so beautiful! keep writing
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Wow, this produces such beautiful imagery. Truly wonderful.
| EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
"casting a fluorescent shadow on the indigo sun"
What a great line. I like this :)