Nice work! It was really good!

I for one found this to be a very entertaining read! Besides who doesn't love a British accent!?

Nice story! I loved it :-)

:)

I am DYING right now. So awesome. I want that to happen to me.

I LOVE this.

i like it, and this is JUST the kind of humor i like. PLUD there was a british guy!

Ahaha, loved this oneshot :) Greg sounded hot. I want a cookie now.

Anyway, great story! :D

who said it wasn't funny. it WAS(: i like the 'been a dead giveaway when I started talking!' part. haha:D

Hahahaha (:

"I see you're looking at my cookie," he commented, holding the cookie out in front of him. Sniggers burst out of me as I quickly considered just how odd that sounded, but I hushed them up when Mr. Sexy Accent gave me a strange look. I wanted to think I was cute and innocent, not downright weird like I really was. Well, for now. The weirdness could come after I successfully completed Operation Steal-the-Cookie-Without-His-Noticing. Yeah, because that was going to be really easy considering that he was holding the cookie right in his hand.

Ugh.

That's gotta be my favorite part, I laughed so much! It's just so awkward and strange to me that it's completely hilarious! Great job! (:

THAT WAS SO CUTE !

I can't believe he actually bite her. He doesn't even know her name and he bite her.

Okay over the biting thing, I do think it was funny that she thought he was a vampire. Also, cannibal would be a thought that ran though my mine too. And I wold probably stayed away.. or tried to.. even with a British accent. But I do really like how the deal was pretty much in her favor. She got a cookie and a dance with a hot guy.

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

I thought it was extremely cute - I was smiling while reading during the entire story. I especially liked the whole "Operation Steal-the-Cookie-Without-His-Noticing" part, haha. Really good job! _

It was really funny! :) Good job! :)



~Bubbly Girl

Well, I found that hilarious. So maybe the kind of people who don't appreciate this kind of humour just have a couple of marbles missing... or maybe I do. Either way, I liked it, even though I didn't catch the Alice in Wonderland reference.