it's very funny, i think

LOL funny D

LOL "Did you just bite me?"

Somehow, that sounds sillier when I replayed it in my mind XD

LOL i thought it was funny! Beginning was best but I found the bite somewhat random, but it was a necessary qualification for the story so I suppose that can't be helped. Yeah, I thought it was funny!

I totally appreciate the humor of this wonderful story! :D I'm only sorry that I never read it prior to this. Good show!

That was the best One-Shot I have ever read! I totally got the humor and thought it was hilarious. I am reading your other story, Fateful Friday, and I really like your writing style. Keep writing!

~FictionPressGirl~

In contrast with your author's note, this is exactly the kind of humor I love. It was very cute, and I loved it.

Keep up the fabulous writing, and have a lovely week!

Emily

I can't stop laughing! And it's 2:40 in the morning,I'm supposed to be doing bio homework, and instead am reading this, over and over and over again, dying of laughter.

My favorite lines:

". . until I unexpectedly felt his teeth chomp down on the side of my neck as if I were the cookie itself. Ohmigod, what if he’d given me the cookie so he could eat me himself? What if he were a cannibal?"

That line made me go crazy. I literally fell OFF my seat laughing. I love Keira.

And then...

{“You heard me! NOT COOL to go around biting strangers!” I shot him my best death glare, which, similar to my puppy dog look, could have sent Attila the Hun cowering in a corner. Except, apparently, Mr. Sexy Accent Who Was Also a Cannibal, since he just blinked and smiled.

“Oh, well I’m Greg.” He stuck out his hand. I just looked at it as if it were made of some weird fungus.}

That by far, must be the best part of the story. AND THEN!

{He shrugged. “I just wanted to see if . . . I don’t know . . . if you tasted good. But obviously, you’re not food.”

“Um. No,” I agreed. “I’m not. Which I thought would have been a dead giveaway when I started talking!”}

You're totally killing me here...I can't help but laugh ON AND ON AND ON! And now my stomach hurts.

AH-MAZING! A total favorite. :)

Ahahahahah.! (:

The ending was cute.

And I love accents.

Omg this was hilarious and a brilliant idea! Do stuff like this happen in real life, I wonder.

Keep up the good work!

gulistanlik

“I just wanted to see if . . . I don’t know . . . if you tasted good."

I almost died laughing. Literally. *raises eyebrow* Though is some hot British guy thought I smelled good, I'd let him bite me...*evil giggles*

that was AWESOME! I was having a bad day...until now :)

cool!

I found it quite humorous.

First off, I must say I FREAKIN LOVE BRITISH ACCENTS! But Italian and Aussie accents are right up there too :) Secondly, this story was hilarious! I bow down to your utmost weirdness lol. (Maybe it's because I'm weird too, but I'm keeping that a secret ;P)