Reviews for unfinished tidbits
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Interesting repetition... I have no idea what the answer s though... lol
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 9/1/2007
interesting.. I love the first line.. the second line confused me bc i read tear as the wrong tear, but after rereading its nice too.. great piece
SeaVoi chapter 3 . 6/4/2007
very interesting, an acid tear
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
um... what are you smoking? lol... just kidding!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
The expansiveness of the philosophical thought in this is openly wonderful. Kind of like the truck is stuck in the mud, and the engines flooded, and the more you rev the engine the more stuck the truck gets, yet the simple repetition is the only thing that will get the truck unstuck. I went a little off subject, but it might be relevant in the thought process that you are conveying. Very interesting MD:77.
ohgeerachel chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
a little confusing but i like it...