Reviews for I could break you
she smolders chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Somehow you manage to speak about something that's been on my mind a lot lately. This poem is just amazing and beautiful too.
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Hm. I like it. I love that idea of breaking someone. If only because I don't think I have the strength or the will to do so. I'm more of a masochist anyway.

Anyway, your lines are beautiful. "I’d like to step all over you fingers and/hear you cry out, vulnerable and wounded/so I could heal you with old remedies, amuse you with sand-box jokes." I wonder if the person would like being hurt, being punished, almost, for their "lack of morality," as you say.

Beautiful, again.