Reviews for ipods and hearts
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Hee, very neat analogy/metaphor. I love it. And the final 3 lines were strong.

Simfreak111 chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
haha. my iPod controls my life now. this poem is very entertaining. good work. keep on writing!
Susannah Simon chapter 1 . 5/31/2007
haha that's kinda cute


cool theme

ipods and hearts, two things that are really unrelated, but you managed to relate them! great job!

i liked it