Reviews for Ice Cold
seventhchords chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Slow as I am, I couldn't quite grasp the logic of this at first glance. I found this positively intriguing, and actually liked the way you kept in short in general. Good work.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
simply waking up, don't we all want to go back to dreaming?

good haiku

keep writing
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
really touches my heart:)- it seems so true though... nice job!
hey maria chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
This is a really intriguing poem and I know I'm probably going to be thinking about this for a while to try to figure out what it means. Well-written; nice job.
Basara chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
most people, yes...

Lost in A World of Pain chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
A very well put together Haiku. I will be honest in saying that I re-read this poem several times trying to pin point exactly what connotations this poem can have. But the wording is so well put together and the possibilities far to diverse with the meaning that this poem could have that I must be honest in saying I can't decide on one single possibility. But then, I believe that is what you were trying to achieve? Though I might be totally off the mark mind you. At any rate, I really enjoyed this poem. Good stuff. Hope your vacation is going well!


Lost in A World of Pain
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Beautiful metaphor, it's so painfully true... Lovely haiku.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Wow, this brought back memories. Just...I don't know, I can just relate. Great job.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Lol. Funny and beautifully written.