Reviews for I Am Asylum
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Um, wow. This person second guessed themselves a lot. Great show of insanity! *claps* lol

All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Great images. I could totally see this poem in my mind. Great job.

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
The last two lines really made the poem.

The Jynx of Kari chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
wow. no wonder so many people like you. lol. For "teenage outbursts" they're pretty good. I really really liked the descriptions intertwined with simple things to make it more complex and deeper than it is. The long stanzas to describe one thing makes the context even richer than it is. I'm reading more from you.

DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
"and the impossibilities

Are now impossible"-These lines confused me. If it's an impossibility, shouldn't it be inherently impossible? Why would it only be impossible now? Or am I just being too nitpicky, and am just in the wrong frame of mind to understand this...maybe. Ugh.

"Anything is possible and more

Than plausible"-These lines are wonderful, though. I love how they sound.

"while noise

Is there but is not here"-That part is *so* surreal. It's like...dang, I can't explain it. It's just cool and freaky.